It’s almost the end of May, everybody. In a few short days, this month will be entirely used up and cast aside in favour of June, and I’ll have to make good on my promise to myself that my book – my ‘Eldritch’ – will be ready to start the process of finding an agent.
That’s the problem with making promises to yourself, isn’t it? You’ve got to keep them.
I’m not saying that ‘Eldritch’ isn’t ready. It’s sitting here beside me, in a satisfyingly thick bundle of paper; I’ve read it over and over again. I’ve tweaked it, and fixed it, and pulled sentences apart, and unmixed my metaphors, and checked for continuity errors, and taken out some of the millions of commas that seem to grow, unchecked, in everything I write. But, somehow, it just doesn’t seem good enough, still.
I just wish I looked as glamorous as this when going through a crisis of confidence. Actually, I look a bit more like Kathy Bates in ‘Misery’. But anyway.
On top of working slowly through The Novel, I’ve also spent the past week writing short stories. I’m trying to work through my list of submission deadlines – lots of competitions are looming, and I want to push myself to enter as many of them as I possibly can. It’s been a while since I made a big submission, and I’ve got to keep this ball rolling as long as I possibly can. However, there is a problem.
None of the short pieces I’ve written have made my personal grade. I’ve worked very hard on them, and I’ve sweated over them, and I’ve chosen words with extreme care, moved paragraphs around, deleted half the story and started again from scratch, changed titles, changed characters, changed everything that can be changed, and… I still don’t like either of the two major pieces of work I’ve completed over the last few days. Hackneyed, cloying, clichéd, boring – this is how they seem, to me. I just know they’ll never be good enough.
The first piece I wrote was a story about a little girl who, confused by something which is happening in her home life, takes out her rage and fear on another girl, a child at school, who innocently involves herself in the first child’s life. The story follows the two girls as they grow older, and shows us how, at one point, the second child has a chance to help the first, but chooses not to because of the pain she still suffers as a result of the first child’s bullying actions when they were younger. I’m not sure why this story didn’t work. It should work. I wanted it to. For a while after I’d written it I wasn’t sure if I liked it or not, which is unusual for me; normally, I’m visceral about these things, and I know straight away how I feel about a written piece. But for this one, I wasn’t sure. I wanted to like it, but it didn’t turn out the way I’d seen it in my head, perhaps.
The second piece was about a shy young man and his forceful, abrasive mother, and their strained relationship. For reasons the boy doesn’t understand at first, his mother’s angry sorrow is focused on a particular place near their home. It’s a place she asks her son not to go to, but it also happens to be a popular meeting point for parties, and so – inevitably – the day comes when the young man betrays his mother’s trust, and attends a party in this strange place, sacred to his mother. When the mother discovers her son has broken his promise to her, she is extremely angry, and in her subsequent breakdown the reason for her dislike of the place becomes clear to the boy at the same time as the reader.
Again, a story I really wanted to like. But it just doesn’t work.
Because of all this, I’ve probably been feeling a bit defeated over the past few days. My energy levels are a bit depleted, maybe, and my brain seems stuck in first gear. I needed some inspiration, some encouragement. I needed a reminder of what I’m doing here, and why I’m doing it.
And, yesterday evening, I found it.
I’m not sure if you’ll have heard of a poet named Dorothy Molloy Carpenter. Sadly, Ms. Molloy Carpenter passed away almost a decade ago, just before her first book of poetry was published (two further volumes were also published posthumously). During her time of illness, when she was facing into treatment for the disease that claimed her life, she wrote a prayer of sorts, called her ‘Credo’. This prayer was printed on a card that was distributed at her memorial service, which happened to be held at the University in which I used to work. Many years ago, someone gave me their copy of this card, and I’ve held on to it ever since; somehow, last night, I happened to read it again just when I needed to. I want to quote a little bit from the beginning of the prayer, if you’ll indulge me:
The one essential thing is for my voice to ring out in the cosmos and to use, to this end, every available second. Everything else must serve this. This is being in love with life.
Every voice is needed for the full harmony.
There you have it. Use every available second. Sing your song. Make your contribution. Say your piece. Write your story. Be in love with life.
Happy Thursday. Use it as well as you can, and remember that the world needs every scrap of positivity, every drop of happiness, and every flicker of love that it can get. We can’t all save the world from terror, but we can all do our best to add to the communal store of joy. Let’s all do what we can.
Hey, I’m glad you found your answer! By the way, my advice would have been this: put the two away for now and begin on something else. Move it! After time you may judge to go back to make the tweaks to the other two or perhaps come to see it differently and just let them go.
Oh, and let me know when you do decide to put #2 out…I’m kind of on the hook here :>)
Wow! That’s exactly what I needed to hear… 😀
I was going to do just that – i.e. put them away and move on – anyway, so I guess we’re ‘mind-sharing’ again. Thanks for the good advice, nonetheless! 🙂
Hope all’s well in NF.
Loved this post too! I’ve said this before, but if you ever need a spare set of eyes… Also, in the paragraph about your comma use, I found a happy amount of commas. Intentional? 😀
Thanks! Yep, I haven’t forgotten the spare set of eyes thing. I just don’t feel anything I’m doing these days is fit for anything besides lining the bin!
I’ve read over the comma paragraph and I’ve no idea what you’re referring to. I don’t see a single extraneous punctuation mark there. 😉
(Actually, genuinely, I don’t see any extraneous punctuation there. As far as I’m concerned all those commas have a right to be there, darnit! Not all would agree, but there you have it.)
I’m a huge comma fan! I *like* a happy amount of commas, I’m rather guilty of it myself. It’s not your fault I don’t know how to pause properly 😉
Hope you have a great day. xx
You too, m’dear. Or, well, a great night. Whatever. I never have any idea what time it is on your planet. 🙂 X